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-| jimmy-quote = <span style="font-weight: bold;">Thank you.</span> Imagine if every person on earth could share in the free and total access to all human knowledge. <span style="font-weight: bold;">Your donation</span> helps get us closer.
+| jimmy-quote = <span style="font-weight: bold;">Thank you.</span> Imagine a world in which every single human being can freely share in the sum of all knowledge <span style="font-weight: bold;">Your donation</span> helps get us closer.
 | jimmy-sig = Jimmy Wales, Founder of Wikipedia
-| comments-text = Our annual fundraiser doesn't start until November but we are currently doing short 1 hour tests to find different voices to share the story of the Wikimedia projects. We welcome your feedback (below) on why you chose to donate today.
+| comments-text = Our annual fundraiser doesn't start until November, but we are currently doing one-hour tests to find different voices to share the story of the Wikimedia projects. We'd love to hear why you chose to donate today.
 | share-title = Send this email to friends
 | share-intro = Enter email addresses
 | share-subject = Join me in supporting Wikipedia!
-| share-message = "Imagine if every person on earth could share in the free and total access of all human knowledge. That’s why I gave to the Wikimedia Foundation. Please join me in supporting Wikipedia."
+| share-message = Imagine a world in which every single human being can freely share in the sum of all knowledge."
 | story-title = Please share your feedback
 | story-links = Read other [[Stories2/en|Wikipedia stories]].
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 | story-city = City:
 | story-email = Email:
-| story-your-story = Your feedback:
+| story-your-story = Your comments:
 | story-permission = By checking this box, you grant the Wikimedia Foundation permission to follow-up with you directly regarding your story, and to use it to publicize the Wikimedia Foundation and its projects.
-| story-optional = Optional
+| story-optional = optional
 | story-submit = Submit
 | support-title = Show your support for Wikimedia